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 当我们在选择雅思考试的时候,就已经注定了要经过大量的练习和刷题。因为想要在雅思上得到比较好的成绩而不付出努力是不可能的,因为雅思考试不像简单的高考,甚至比高考英语难度大很多。选择雅思考试的考生应该着重放在口语、听力上面。而不是一味的做题。今天,韦沃英语就来教教大家如何来提高雅思成绩的一些策略和方法,一起来看看吧!

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一、听话

就是尊重出题者,人家指哪,我们打哪,这样才能弹无虚发,一招制敌。落实在写作之中,就是审题环节的精准到位以达到良好的任务回应度。任务回应是雅思写作中最重要的一项评分标准,凌驾于CC,LR和GRA之上。要求我们必须回答题目的所有部分。


首先是题目的上部分,即话题部分:

你需要抓住话题三要素:主体、动作、限定词。

以下列题目为例:

It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them.

Why has this happened and how to address this issue?

此题目是一个报告类题目,故而正常情况话题部分常常描述一个现象,即便有时以观点的形式出现,也是挂羊头卖狗肉,侧重点依旧是后面的现象。


主体:we人们

动作:live in a soceity   生活在社会上 (你一定觉得简直废话,因为人是社会主义动物俨然已经是盖棺定论的真理。莫急,看限定词)

限定词:throw-away    (什么鬼?满脸竖条……)

throw-away  含义有些让人摸不着头脑,按照常理贴心的出题者应该会给出解释(无独有偶,此前“horizontal city” and“vertical city” 出现在题目中时,出题者多在题目中给出了具体注释)在此指 throw away what we use in daily life, instead of recycling and reusing.


其次是题目的任务部分:本题是一道典型的分析原因和解决方案的报告类题目,所以两问皆要回答,缺一不可。

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分析完毕后,进行头脑风暴,此题的切入点应该是 throw away, not recycle and reuse,我们顺藤摸瓜,可以得出如下思路:

• throw-away:

1、不心疼: 科技进步—大规模生产—新品价格低廉— 扔得起

2、不值得—很多东西都不能长久使用(not last long)  

3、很麻烦 — 城市中的修理点非常少

• not recycle/reuse:

1、消费观念改变  (consumption concept)  — e.g. 新三年旧三年,缝缝补补又三年的想法已然过时 ( once praised qualities like thrift have become outmoded ideas )

2、缺乏环保意识(lack of environmental awareness) , 自己的行为污染环境而不自知

3、有意识,不愿意做,因为太麻烦 ( not willing to sacrifice their convenience)

3.I am innovative.I pay attention to detail and find opportunities where other people see none.
我是一个有创新能力的人,关注细节,我可以在别人不在意的地方发现价值
4.I leads people. I can unite people around a vision and motivate a team to excellence.
我是有领导能力的人。我可以让人们为了一个共同的目标而奋斗,并且激励一个团队取得成功。
5.I always has an eye on my target. I endeavour to deliver high-quality work on time, every time.
我是个专注于目标的人。每一次我都会及时地提供高质量的服务。

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3.I am innovative.I pay attention to detail and find opportunities where other people see none.
我是一个有创新能力的人,关注细节,我可以在别人不在意的地方发现价值
4.I leads people. I can unite people around a vision and motivate a team to excellence.
我是有领导能力的人。我可以让人们为了一个共同的目标而奋斗,并且激励一个团队取得成功。
5.I always has an eye on my target. I endeavour to deliver high-quality work on time, every time.
我是个专注于目标的人。每一次我都会及时地提供高质量的服务。


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It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them. 

Why has this happened and how to address this issue?

有人认为我们生活在一个一次性商品的社会:人们会扔掉在日常生活中使用的东西,而不是循环和再利用。

这一状况因何产生? 如何解决这一问题?

范文:

The masses increasingly tend to use daily products only once and then dispose of them instead of keeping these items for a later use. It is of great significance to understand how this throw-away culture has developed and how to reverse this trend.This throw-away culture is mainly due to the fact that commercial goods are less expensive than they were in the past. As a result of  the popularization of mass production and assembly lines, both the production costs are reduced and the workforce’s productivity is improved, which cut the prices of goods, rendering them more affordable. In the meantime, the public’s incomes are higher than ever before, which encourages them to attach more importance to living standard, including purchasing brand-new items either for their cutting-edge functions or appealing appearances rather than use an outmoded one for a long period.

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Other factors accountable for this trend are people’s low environmental awareness and the complex recycling process itself. People are not aware that household appliances end up in landfill sites and these non-biodegradable products can have a destructive effect on soil and rivers.Besides, the recycling process is usually quite demanding. An empty plastic milk container is available to be recycled, whereas a one containing a trivial amount of liquid is not suitable as involving the contamination of the plastic recycling process. Ordinary people are less likely to sacrifice their convenience to rinse or dry bottles before putting them into dustbins.


As the overconsumption of consumer goods is pervasive, it is important to take some measures to mitigate this problem. Governments can introduce laws to discourage consumers from excessively purchase disposable products. China, for instance, passed a national wide legislation banning single-use plastic bags in the year 2008, which require convenience stores, markets and groceries not to provide any free plastic bags.

 

To summarize, people’s attitude towards consumption and the complexity of recycling process are main reasons behind excessive consumption of disposable items. However, we are optimistic to take steps to alleviate the problem in the promising future.


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